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archie smith boy wonder
Archie Smith Boy Wonder
December 17, 2009
By: Domenic
Archie was in bed one night nothing was going wrong. Then he heard some one screaming. A huge bright light hit his door open and there it was a ghost that lived there a long time ago. "Who are you?" he said. Then the ghost left the room.
"That was weird " . He went back to sleep and said I hope that never happens again. His mom came in the room and said are you okay his mom said. "No I am not I was very terrified by a ghost that came in to my room."
Something tapped him on the shoulder and there it was again. He said "what do you want from me?" The ghost spoke and said " I want my room back" he said in a very in a very scary voice. "Okay but why"? "I have been in my coffin for 40 years and I want my life back to. I will haunt this house until I get it."
The next day he went back to sleep and he was very very scared. That night the ghost went into Archie's moms room and Archie's mom was very terrified. He was haunting the house like crazy and everybody in the house was very terrified.They all had terrible nightmares about that ghost.
The next day he got up and he said "that was the worst nightmare in the whole world. I hope that dream never happens again." That night it was not a nightmare this was real life in the house. The ghost went back and fourth to the rooms and scared everyone in the whole room. Then it haunted the whole town because his friends lived at all of those houses and he was very mad.
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its ok but i would describe the light in the pic more as a wisp
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